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You press down on the lever, straining for the sound you adore.

Clip, clip.

Sharp metal blades clamp down, and a strip of white breaks free. One more snip to go, you've been waiting for this. You slide the clipper a touch right; you squint as you adjust the blade's position; too far and you unearth new fleshy depths, too near and you’ll waste a snip. You take a deep breath and tuck your elbows closer to your ribs. Pull your head lower, closer. Your chest stops rising, the soft whooshing of air from your nostrils stop. Control is vital!

You press.

Clip.

A little white sliver does a dainty somersault flip before falling into darkness. You see its little curlicue flip, but you must move on. You are on a mission, and the goal approaches. Victory will be yours, must be yours. None must survive this purge.

But the sounds you loathe are always loud and clear.

"Are you cutting your skin again? How long have you been at it?! It's all over the floor! Oh my god, your fingers are bleeding! Stop this, stop cutting now!"

Your eyes narrow, your nose scrunches at the condescension. What would they know, degenerates with finely manicured nails, gleaming mother-of-pearls on their fingertips? What do they know of jagged cuticles and hangnails, the irritation of unevenly cut edges? What do they know of the urge – no, the need to remove these eyesores the way only you can?

They know nothing.

You target the next hangnail, straining for the sound you adore.
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[Edit] OH MY GOD this piece had no readers and BOOM a DD!? Thank you all for reading and faving! <3 
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Given 2013-12-15
Clippings by ~J-ko ( Featured by neurotype )
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dragoeniex Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014
So. A favorite show of mine (discovered only recently) had one episode that involved torture. Via nail clippers. >__< Both that scene and this story made me cringe.

Grats on the DD. This is uncomfortable, but very telling of the character.
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J-ko Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
Torture by nail clippers sound very disturbing indeed. I have enough problems thinking about toenail-related accidents. ><

Thanks for reading!
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KawaiiShootingStar Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
This is amazing! O.O Maybe I just interpret it weirdly, but I love the deeper meaning to it. Anyways, I really like it~ ^^
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J-ko Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
I'm interested in your interpretation to see if it's different or similar to mine. Please do tell~ :)

Thank you for reading it too!
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KawaiiShootingStar Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
I guess it's just... to some extent... being a perfectionist. Like, never satisfied with attempt. It describes my life pretty well. Just not in the exact way. ^.^

You're welcome! It was really amazing~ <3
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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J-ko Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
Thank you! :hug: And thank you for reading too!
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adarkworldfantasy Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Frighteningly enough, this sounds like me :rofl::lmao:  Especially the What do they know of jagged cuticles and hangnails, the irritation of unevenly cut edges? What do they know of the urge – no, the need to remove these eyesores the way only you can?
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J-ko Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
I take it you've got a bit of an OCD streak in you? :) (Smile) 
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adarkworldfantasy Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just a bit ;)
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